Perhaps show him this thread.

These lyrics are pretty awful, I'll say now that I know they're not yours. I held back because I didn't want to make you feel terrible.

Oh, and when he says "A LITTLE DOWN" in the demon voice, I want to shoot myself out of embarassment for him. PS, this is a song about a ****ing vibrator, so it should at least be funny. "Pleasure and pain/Love's hateful reign" Simply horrendous. I hope this is supposed to be a joke song, because then all it failed at was being funny. If it's serious, it failed at being poetic and even half decent. Lyrically I mean. The band's not bad. You guys could have radio play if your singer wrote better melodies and lyrics.