got a rhyme for you

This is a rhyyme or tune if u like. It is meant to sound like an old George M. Chohan. For those who may not know he was a very popular entertainer in the 1920's. This meaterial was model'd after a war time song that he was very famous for. His was politcially correct. I call this " Over There"


Over there, over there >
I say no, will not go ... >
over there ....while>
the President's drumming>
the army's comming ......>
we'll bring peace over there>
over there, over there...>
I'll say no, I won't go.....>
over there ..................>
while the army's comming,>
with guns, and money.....>
I'll sit right here till It's over ,>over there :eek:

Seems a bit cliche and repetitive to me.

I like the repetetive sound. Reminds me of the neil young song, Ohio. Keep writing.

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