Originally Posted by: KutzkiHey man,
i liked your songs so much i will do my best to give you some constructive critisism so you can continue to bring music to my ears.
o ya and in advance, sorry if points i make someone already made them
ok
1-you gotta continue the songs. most of your songs consist of one bridge, and very good ones, but thats not a song. you gotta make them have more of a body ya know.
a song should just be - eyes or, lips. A song is like a chick, you dig?
2-i feel if you added words that would lead to a whole other demention of your song.
3-i feel solo's are important. if you ant a lead guitarist- check out george harrisons works with the beatles. simple but sick!
umm ya thats about it, rock on?
ya, rock on dude!
hope to see more songs posted man.
Peace out
Aaron

I agree wholeheartedly with every single thing you've said. Now, my excuses.

1.) The reason they're so short is simply because I want to get them all recorded in one take, and 95% of the time, I screw up the last four notes, or something like that.

2.) The kind of lyrics I like songs to have are sort of poetic; lines that make you think. I have to pretty much write songs one line at a time, and I feel every single one has to be great. If I just gave it words off the top of my head, it would soil the song, and I'd never forgive myself for it. I guess what I'm saying is, I will give it words, but it'll be a while.

3.) I'm really not a lead guitarist at all, and I love how George Harrison plays simple stuff that sounds great. My problem is that I can't even hear solos in my head that would fit the song. All I can imagine is spacey feedback wailing over the song pattern, and I think we can all agree that that would be stupid if placed in every single song.

Anyhow, thanks for the advice. I'm glad most of you like them. :)