i liked your songs so much i will do my best to give you some constructive critisism so you can continue to bring music to my ears.
o ya and in advance, sorry if points i make someone already made them
ok
1-you gotta continue the songs. most of your songs consist of one bridge, and very good ones, but thats not a song. you gotta make them have more of a body ya know.
a song should just be - eyes or, lips. A song is like a chick, you dig?
2-i feel if you added words that would lead to a whole other demention of your song.
3-i feel solo's are important. if you ant a lead guitarist- check out george harrisons works with the beatles. simple but sick!
umm ya thats about it, rock on?
ya, rock on dude!
hope to see more songs posted man.
Peace out
Aaron
When it comes down to it, our guitar's will always be there for us. :rolleyes: