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sololoco
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03/30/2006 6:36 pm
Hi, new song uploaded, I think is a blues but I'm not sure. Please, check out my song.

Valeriana
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=462555

Thanks.
Regards.
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04/01/2006 6:32 pm
:cool: That was awesome! A brilliant compositional idea, with very professional-sounding production, and a great groove. Sort of like Pink Floyd meets the Gorillaz (with a bit of Sonata Arctica-style guitar work thrown in there ;) ). The heartbeat idea was a stroke of genius. I couldn't exactly understand what was being sung, but the vocal tone was very atmospheric. My only complaint is that the keyboards in the call-and-response near the beginning were perhaps a bit too bright - could've done with some reverb or more bass. Overall, though, this is fantastic. Rep points for you! Keep up the good work! :)
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04/01/2006 6:53 pm
Yowzers..now this is interesting. Kinda sounds mideval, or something. Pretty kick ass.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.

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john waite
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04/02/2006 12:01 am
WOW!! this is why I love this website......kinda of a freaky mix of muddy waters meets Mad Max!!! Just a tip as a player...watch those bends....don't let them go flat on ya...push them with a melodic vibrato and the solos will rock harder!!! Very interesting stuff!! Keep writing, I want to hear more!!!
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04/02/2006 4:58 pm
Very bluesy/Pink Floyd feel. I really liked it, however with that said, I believe there are some technical issues that could be improved. Bending, Vibrato etc. However, that will all come with practice.

Keep up the good work!

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04/02/2006 9:40 pm
how do u upload ur song in soundlcick mate
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04/04/2006 9:04 am
Hi, thanks for all your good opinions.
Sorry for the spanish vocals, but my english is poor and my pronunciation worst :(

Here the lyrics jesus:

La puedes sentir sobre tu piel/You can feel she over you skin
Hueles su aliento suave a miel/smelling her breath of soft honey
Es en verdad un gran placer/Is really true a great delight
Calma tu cuerpo y alivia tu sed./Calm your body and satisfy your desire

Valeriana./Valerian
Hoy muero por ti./Now I die for your
Valeriana./Valerian
No vivo sin ti/I can't live without you

Sorry jeffhx, I'cant understand what are you asking me (mate?, I can´t understand the meaning of this word here, sorry).

Thanks again.
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04/04/2006 2:28 pm
That was really fun, a new spin on the blues, very creative. :)
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04/04/2006 3:03 pm
I like the bass coming in on the heartbeat.

Although for some reason, the heartbeat sound effect always gives me the shivers.
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...
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04/04/2006 7:09 pm
Originally Posted by: sololocoHi, thanks for all your good opinions.
Sorry for the spanish vocals, but my english is poor and my pronunciation worst :(

Here the lyrics jesus:

La puedes sentir sobre tu piel/You can feel she over you skin
Hueles su aliento suave a miel/smelling her breath of soft honey
Es en verdad un gran placer/Is really true a great delight
Calma tu cuerpo y alivia tu sed./Calm your body and satisfy your desire

Valeriana./Valerian
Hoy muero por ti./Now I die for your
Valeriana./Valerian
No vivo sin ti/I can't live without you

Sorry jeffhx, I'cant understand what are you asking me (mate?, I can´t understand the meaning of this word here, sorry).

Thanks again.


Oh! I didn't realise it was in Spanish... cool!
Nice lyrics, by the way. :cool: Keep up the good work, man.
"It's all folk music... I ain't never heard no horse sing!"
- Attributed variously to Leadbelly and Louis Armstrong

If at first you don't succeed, you are obviously not Chuck Norris.

l337iZmz r@wk o.K!!!??>
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04/04/2006 7:24 pm
"Mate" is just one off those crazy ass words the Aussie's use. It just means friend.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.

METOOB
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sololoco
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04/07/2006 11:04 am
thanks Eric, now a have a new word learned :D
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