I'm with eric all the way on this one. Cliches suck. I go out of my way to write bizarre, abstract songs. In fact, I don't even write anything down until I've got enough interesting lines to draw attention away from the more straightforward ones. I think it makes the straightforward ones sound all the more profound and cool. So anyhow, work on it. I'd like to see the finished product(s).

Hanukkah tomato, or whatever eric said.