short rock track I am working on


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03/20/2006 2:52 am
Check it out and tell me what you think. It needs work. I botch the lead about 26 seconds in but I like it so far.


http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3665200&q=hi
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03/20/2006 7:17 am
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03/20/2006 7:57 am
Nice dude. It doesn't have the crispness of some of your other tracks though...not sure why
I think having some harmonisation with the lead would sound awesome, like two or 3 guitars at once.
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03/21/2006 2:37 am
yeah, its got good potential, man. layering the backing track a bit more would give it a better, fuller sound tho.
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03/22/2006 8:58 pm
Sounds good dude. I dig the rhythms muchly. :cool:
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03/23/2006 7:57 pm
Thanks ya'll. I'm trying to find a better tone for the rythym track. Julian is right, it just doesn't sound quite right yet. But I'm working on it and I'll repost it when it's done. It'll be a while though, I'm in the process of moving back to Houston. :eek:
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03/27/2006 1:10 am
Sounds great! I would suggest recording the rythm guitar twice and pan one about 75-100% left and the other 75-100% right, and put the lead more centered.
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