heyyy you got some of that keyboard action in the begining. that sounds good. oh wait. was that the ebow?

it does seem to drag on in places like you anticipated. but that will be fixed, so im not holding to you. i like some of your bass riffs in there too, parts where you slide down the neck- good effect.

but it would be nice to work on some of the different volumes. all of the solos are the same volume and all sit on the same level EQwise as the rest. it would be nice for some diversifying in that department.

other than that, your continuing to build up another killer track, keep it up. :D