My new Peice of ROCK!

Working on a new peice, got most of the main parts done, still a lot to do though, its for my music class end exam so any comments would be greatly appreciated!

MY NEW SONG

its the first song on the player!

thanks in advance for any comments :)

I love the sound- your technique is crispy!

The chordal ideas are interesting, but the lead guitar part has far too many fast trills and "widdly bits", especially in the first verse. A more lyrical approach would probably suit this arrangement better. Your technique is skilful and precise, though, and you have a great tone. Good work!

This is brilliantly played, you are obviously more than a little talented :D

But.... it doesn't do anything for me. I'm sorry it's probably just me but I think your talent needs a direction. A songwriter with melody and lyrics would be just right, somewhere to hang your undoubted ability (want to collaborate, I'm in Brighton btw? ;) )

Cheers

Dick

hey thanks for the comments, my other peices on that page are a little more "enthralling", with the 3rd one down being my most accomplished melody wise i think, i have another peice that i am really feeling right now and i may even put a sample up soon.