As I said, it wasnt bad. Didnt say it was good though. Your tone is poor owing to poor muting technique. Your note picking is way too slow and inconsistent. Your playing speed expands and shrinks - maybe because you're not playing to a metronome.

The thing about playing guitar is that the last 5% of perfection is the hardest to achieve and you're still very far from 95% perfection.

Moreover I think in the present day and age, Eddie Van Halen is overrated. Tapped triplets - give me a break!

We try to encourage, but don't push your luck kid!