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Jolly McJollyson
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Jolly McJollyson
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12/05/2005 8:23 am
When was it that "no" became the standard?
The all-powerful compass of bull****?
What god of heaven,
Some faceless creator molding and sculpting,
High atop his throne,
Removed from the paltry acquiescence of mundane cycles,
Tumbling and turning the pallid emotions of his creations,
What god delights in his walls,
his invisible boundaries,
None can cross?
Is this some act of mercy?
That men squander their lives
While all the time hearing No.
No.
No.
F***!
Never will they understand what they are told
Nor why
Nor within any reason should they
If any reason should present itself
And always the reason ends with No.
"No"
Which we dread so deeply
Yet welcome so warmly
into the fickle,
cowardly mind.
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...
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magicninja
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12/14/2005 2:32 am
Ummm... NO! :D
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Jolly McJollyson
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Jolly McJollyson
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12/14/2005 3:12 am
Originally Posted by: magicninjaUmmm... NO! :D

ARGH! It haunts my footsteps!
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...
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magicninja
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12/14/2005 4:46 am
Very good though Jolly. Very Good.
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Jolly McJollyson
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Jolly McJollyson
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12/14/2005 7:43 am
Originally Posted by: magicninjaVery good though Jolly. Very Good.

Haha, yeah, I wish, man. Kind of wrote it off the top of my head after I read 6strngs' poetry thread.
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...
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magicninja
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12/14/2005 8:31 am
Wow. I wanna hear one you think on for a week or two.
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rockonn91
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rockonn91
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12/14/2005 11:49 pm
mann i remember when i was a newbie to this site and jolly would have tons of new songs on here all the time... it was increible
JK :cool:

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