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6strngs_2hmbkrs
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6strngs_2hmbkrs
Proud Celica Enthusiast
Joined: 08/14/04
Posts: 3,837
12/06/2005 12:00 am
biting me with jaws of steel
gnawing inside at how I feel
cutting me, blood slowly drips
calling me, just failing fits

jagged blade cutting so deep
untied from the ones we keep
shadows falling from your eyes
ushering my new demise

piercing through my failing heart
happy feelings ripped apart
words with lethal capacity
surprised by the audacity

come sunlight onto my bed
bring forth my intrepid
let me rise and set with you
moving on, the day is through



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