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16andlifetogo
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16andlifetogo
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12/22/2005 1:10 am
agreed, verry catchy. nice work 6s2h. make shure to post when you get some music behind it.


my 2 cents: id change "80 in the 45" to 80 in a 45". "the 45" to me sounds like a place. JMO

good work :)
Later in the evening
As you lie awake in bed
With the echoes from the amplifiers
Ringing in your head
You smoke the day's last cigarette
Rememb'rin' what she said
Originally Posted by: Cryptic ExcretionsI'm a super hero. It's what I do.