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Fenderalltheway
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Fenderalltheway
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12/16/2005 2:02 am
ok, so the second one its like about what the world will be like...if we dont work together, you know, well here it is

main riff a#,g#f,each strummed 8 times then f twice, and go back to g# and strum once. and then the chorus would be d3 three times, c# three times, and g# three times, then cminor#, and you do that three times.im kinda working on a bridge, so here are the words.

verse 1: the world is becoming a piece of trash, promises of hope will never last
The war is on, and we cant do a thing, untill we hear the gunshots ring,
This is the world were walking into,
alone we walk in, together we gata come through

chorus 1: stop all the global warming
stop all the wars at hand
this is what we gata do to same the world,
and the race of man

well, me and my friend wrote a second verse, but we trashed it, so, well i wana see what you guys think about our two songs(remember he wrote them not me...hehe) so post some feedback

thanks
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