Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonThe lyrics are posted here: http://www.guitartricks.com/forum/showpost.php?p=137445&postcount=5

How about now?

By the way, I'm not saying you have to like it, just don't put the word "music" in quotation marks when referring to it as if it's not valid. I feel the melody is fairly strong and the hook is catchy (because it is), so I feel that's evidence of melodic sensibility. Also, music I've created has no bearing on my judgment, nor am I sure why you've brought it up. I simply stated that Yngwie is not a very good composer/songwriter. His fast runs are simply there to show off and have no bearing on the motion of the song. And if his fast runs conveyed some kind of feeling (i.e. Chopin, Liszt, Beethoven, Haydn, etc) I would think much better of him.

Ok, fair enough. Look, i have to go to school in exactly 8 hours and 15 minutes, and i still have to take a shower and eat something before i go to sleep. I'll read the lyrics tomorrow, and let you know then. Btw i brought it up because you pretty much said yngwie sux, just in a nicer way, and i just compared it to your music. (see? no quotation marks this time ;))