Originally Posted by: SPLhttp://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=431416

Hey guys, I just spent the last two days working on this one. This is the first time I recorded guitars AND bass, plus I dragged and dropped every drum hit by hand. Lots of work, but I learned a lot from it. Plus, it's the first time ever I actually recorded a somewhat "finished" song (eventhough it is lacking vocals).
I didn't spend much time mixing this, so the overall quality isn't the cleanest. If/when I clean that up, I'll replace the MP3 on the site.

Anyway, it's up to you now. Any comments, both negative and positive, are deeply appreciated. In particular I'm looking for comments on song structure and/or the drum patterns. But ANY comments are more than welcome.

wow, it has something, that's for sure.
but still, you really should thinks of an melody and a solo. then it's really done, I thinks. BUt I did like the Bridge you did.With those long chords. awesome.

but you definitely need to shred, you miss al the fun :D