Done well man, it is a little too squeaky clinically clean for me, I prefer a more organic guitar however it is clear that you have made a good effort ! I particularly like the big ringey Bob Mould esq chords, too cool !!

Are you going to add vocals / other instruments ? At the moment, to me the dynamics say, ok hold on we are going some place really interesting but haven't quite got there yet !

lots of potential !