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freckledick
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freckledick
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Joined: 10/15/05
Posts: 9
10/16/2005 7:56 am
yeah i like it. the essence is much the same.

i can't help sounding a bit like cat stevens everytime i try to write though,
thats why i like distortion.

i'm trying to finish a couple of songs at the moment. put closure on a few i been sitting on. then, all i need is a band.

i'm trying to put a solid foundation under these words, at the moment all i got is d g c. ha. trying to spice it up with some fancy strumming. i think it is going to have to remain an accoustic song though.

it takes more than a glance
to look into someones soul
and discover all the feelings
they have ever known

it takes an open mind
to accept more than you know
and if you realise this
you'll still be in control

needs more verse and probably a chorus and maybe a bridge,
but its a start.

if someone wants to plaguerise my words. feel free, at least it won't be on my conscience.