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Something i need feedback on for music class! please help!
HERE is the begginings of a peice i am doing for my advanced higher music class, click the headfones to play "new invention" ,any feedback would be great as this is my last year at high school level, next year is university, and i want to get the best grade i can. :)
# 1
sounds good but you do need some type of drums/rythym in there. Not sure exactly what but Schmange will be able to point you in the right direction.
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# 2
Jesus. Make the intro SHORTER, I went through an entire pregnancy while that thing was still playing and I'm a GUY! I like most of the melodies in here a lot. Try and see if you can work on developing the first and last themes more fully. As it is, it just doesn't go anywhere, but you're throwing around a lot of good ideas.
# 3
Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonJesus. Make the intro SHORTER, I went through an entire pregnancy while that thing was still playing and I'm a GUY!
So, was it a boy or a girl?
I am a constant evolving music machine. Oh Man, I just forgot what I was playing. Oh well, on to the next song. :rolleyes:
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Originally Posted by: bigbudaSo, was it a boy or a girl?
Both! RUN TOOOO THE HIIIIIILLS!
# 5
You've got some interesting compositional ideas, and I really like some of the textures you're getting out of your music. I definately agree with shortening the tapping intro at the beginning, but I like the way you bust out of it into quarter notes for a nice feeling of resolution. I'd love to hear the finished product.
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