Here is a song I wrote for my friend to give to her boyfriend, she said she wanted something poppy with a heavy ending. Not my normal style, let me know what you think.
http://www.thekolbfamily.us/scarlets.mp3
Thanks,
Howard
What do you think
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Originally Posted by: hbkolbHere is a song I wrote for my friend to give to her boyfriend, she said she wanted something poppy with a heavy ending. Not my normal style, let me know what you think.
http://www.thekolbfamily.us/scarlets.mp3
Thanks,
Howard
Its cool very Pinkflyodish.. reminds me of "The Wall" a bit :D I think the ending sounds good maybe make that longer it was getting interesting with the whammy bar and faded out... but overall that was cool :cool:
Akira says;
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
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Yeah, very cool!! I liked how the guitar came in... Idk, over all it sounded awesome.
We've been dancin' with Mr. Brownstone...
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Thanx for the compliment, I dont like the ending for the song either but the person I wrote it for wanted an off the wall heavy part. She was so used to hearing my other stuff so..... I'm dropping the end part and am actually going to use that song with my church's worship band. :)
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Nice work. Sounds very Pink Floyd'ish as mentioned already.
Good job!
Good job!
Sometimes I hit notes only dogs can hear.
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