Don't type in shorthand.

That said...

This song reminds me of U2's "Beautiful Day" (structurally, I mean). I'd like to hear this with the music behind them, because the theme has been used, reused, and used again by various artists (for an example see Whitesnake's "Here I Go Again"). I think the music in a song with a commonplace theme can sometimes make up for that.

Oh, and for God's sake don't say "I'm gonna let me go." "It's time to let me go," "It's time for me to go," or even "I think it's time to go."

This song is clearly not about suicide. Your friends should stop listening to bad Emo music or Papa Roach, whichever.