First off, welcome to the boards! About the song, it's got good flow... the lines seem to have some rythym even though I had a hard time finding it. I imagine the song being a punk song with 3 or 4 power chords being strummed in continuous downstrokes in the background... It was nice how the song unfolded... half way through I was wondering if there was a point to the song, then the last verse makes it clear. I don't know if you purposely did it or not (I'm not trying to make a genius out of you haha) but you expressed the mix feelings well in your writing. I could sense the love/hate relationship, well done. Some of the lines seemed forced... like you didn't know what else to put so you just wrote something that went with the scheme. Needs polishing, but very good!!!