My song


crazywolf
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crazywolf
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06/02/2005 4:31 am
What do you think about this song? It sure was a fun one to write...

Little Snake

long day at work mowin lawns when I’m
walking around weed whipin this big
ditch in front of my church just
doin my thing not really lookin up a-
head at what slithered in my path I never
would have seen it coming even if I had a
chance, but I didn’t still it hurts me in-
side so bad I just want to scream and
shout

poor little snake why did you have to
get in my way when I was weed whipin
poor little snake I’m so sorry for
slicing you in half when I was weed whipin

please know my little friend that I did not want to
murder you that day never should have ended up that
way but instead you died a horrific death of miser-
ry and pain you’ll never live to see another
day its sad I know but there’s nothing I can
say or do now to erase what has been
done but I wish you rest in peace for ever
more in eternity away from people like
me

poor little snake why did you have to
get in my way when I was weed whipin
poor little snake I’m so sorry for
slicing you in half when I was weed whipin
1 Peter 2:16
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Andrew Sa
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Andrew Sa
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06/02/2005 8:42 am
dude, you killed the snake...I'm not talking to you!
[FONT=Century Gothic]Hope is when we feel the pain that makes us try again[/FONT]
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aschleman
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aschleman
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06/02/2005 12:31 pm
The rythym that I started to read the song in sounded a lot like a Sublime song. I run stuff over all the time with the mower... don't feel bad.
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x0o_BurnOut_o0x
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x0o_BurnOut_o0x
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06/02/2005 1:26 pm
ROFL great story behind the song man
We've been dancin' with Mr. Brownstone...
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crazywolf
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crazywolf
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06/03/2005 12:21 am
I really didn't feel bad about it sadly, because it was totaly by accident. I saw another one close by and let that one live.

As for the rythem, it constantly switches between 3/4 and 4/4.
3/4(poor little snake) 4/4 (why did ou have to) ect...
1 Peter 2:16
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