please critic my song


Hamberg
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Hamberg
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05/25/2005 7:41 pm
Will you please critic my song RG. Its intended to have vocals eventually. There are no flashy guitar tricks or anything like that; Its just a song. Advice to make it better is more then welcome. Thanks.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/hambergmusic.htm
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Andrew Sa
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06/01/2005 12:14 pm
Wow, I really like that.

If I were you i would add a picked arpeggio to the part that I assume is the chorus(comes in first time at about 50 seconds).

I would add a picked melodic arp part...but thats just me...

I think its great
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LoCkEd&RoCked87
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06/01/2005 1:27 pm
That is a awesome tune. Im always looking for a good tune to play i'ld love to learn it. oh yeah make sure when you get lyrics give me a scream.
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