Bury Me


aschleman
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aschleman
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Joined: 04/26/05
Posts: 2,051
05/12/2005 2:20 pm
This isn't a song yet... because I just now wrote the lyrics... But when I get home I will try to add the music to it. I haven't revised it yet or anything, I just figured I would put it on here for you guys to critique... tell me what I should change or do differently. Be gentle, I wrote it all in my head in like 10 minutes then wrote it in here... It's obviously called "Bury Me" and let me know if the "bury me" repitition is too much... Thanks


The whole time I've been alive,
All these things inside,
They bury me,
The only time I turn around,
I see there's no one around,
They bury me,
With the weight of the world,
Falling on my shoulder,
It buries me,

With this dark and frozen distance,
From the things I want to be,
Talk to me now,
Help me find my way out,
It's too dark I cannot see,
You follow me down,
And when no ones around,
You Bury me,

The whole time I have tried,
I hold on too tight,
They bury me,
The only time I make a sound,
The echoes come back around,
They bury me,
With the weight of the sun,
Feel it all come undone,
It buries me,

With this dark and frozen distance,
From the things I want to be,
Talk to me now,
Help me find my way out,
It's too dark I cannot see,
You follow me down,
And when no ones around,
You Bury me,

Look and you'll see,
All these things aren't free,
Look inside and see,
Watch them bury me
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