Yeah, when i was writing it out on here i was reading it over a last time and i need to fix the sylable count and add a ryme scheme, but i just wanted to get a general idea, to see if i was getting through. Last time i wrote a song, I cocentrated more on the ryming and it had no substanceand it just turned out horrible. Hm, I havent seen blvd's song yet, ill have to look. But thanks for the comments, I got the chorus, im gonna have to tweak it alittle to get it to ryme or what not but here it is.....


Where has all the danger gone?
We left it all behind,
Since when is self discovery wrong?
And being traded for safety of mind?