I too was dissappointed not to hear the guitar solo in "Fade to Black". Other than that, I guess I aggree with the majority of the guys on this thread...it's got some potential, but it needs work.
Obviously the recording was not of a great standard, and with more time in a studio and more takes on most instruments, you would have much better results...what I mean is that, had all of the parts been played and recorded perfectly (some playing mistakes are noticed, which is acceptable live, but NOT on a recording, unless it is a live recording).
It would have been more than decent.
Keep pushing at it...