Does this suck

I have a feeling that this song sucks. I can't tell if it is good because I've heard it so many times during the writing process. Can you please critic the song GD.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/hambergmusic.htm

I agree, good job...but I got lost at 1:07 - 1:11. Something in the rythym and flow just seemed a lil off to me. As for the rest of the song in general, I suggest playing with just a little more feeling or oomph or whatever. Not that it's sloppy in anyway, but just a tad more bite if you know what I mean. But again, good job so far.

Well all I know that is your MUCH better then me! I think its good, but yea add lyrics!

Nice piece, good melody. I think that it could do with some kind of variation in the middle to take it in a different direction for a bit. I always try to either change the key, timing and or rhythm to add some colour. I like the track but I wouldnt stop there with this one. I would add a solo in the middle and a few short licks every now and then to add another voice to the mix. It has great potential and sets the background tone for some nice lead work. I hate vocals in music, so by all means leave them out!

I agree good job and it could use a lead I like leads very much but in the end it is your song so you do what you feel is good.

The people who told you it's bad are very wrong. It's not bad it's different, which is refreshing, unless its different and sucks :p but this is good, i agree it should have vocals and lead guitar.