First thing I'm going to tell you is something I tell alot of my students, and that is to loosen up a bit. You're playing as if you're scared of the strings. Honestly, they don't bite! Were you relaxed while playing? Could you do it with your eyes closed? Are your shoulders relaxed or do you tense up your entire upper body when you play?

Do you have a midi track of this that you can send me? I'd like to comp a couple ideas on it and send them to you to hopefully provide some inspiration and show you just how wide open you can take this song. Thanks!

Scott