Im in a couple of bands an im the main songwriter in all of them, so im always writing stuff and im jusually quite happy with my work.
One of my bands - Havenstance - is a band similar to Nightwish and stuff like that. and here is the lyrics for a song i worte called A Whisper From Beyond The Grave.
I would really appreciate it if you could give me some constructive criticism and feedback, but when ive posted this on other forums most have seemed to like it. Thankyou.
A WHISPER FROM BEYOND THE GRAVE
VERSE 1
I find myself staring up at the sky.
I feel the chills running up and down my spine.
Wondering what it must have been like
To hold you all night.
And now it's all over just a bit too soon.
I wonder where, my life dissapeared to.
If only i could have known you're name.
It all would not have been the same.
VERSE 2
I exhale a last breath into the flowing wind.
I feel at least a part of me must be free.
I'm getting deeper under the spoilt ground.
Try to release this misery in me.
A single tear drop like lightning on the road.
A body scarred and burnt.
I lay open armed like a winged beast.
And prayed for the sun to shine.
VERSE 3
Just a whisper from beyond my grave.
These feelings i do deprave.
I tried to hold on, be there for you.
But i knew you didn't want me to.
So i finally gave up the fight.
I finally sank away into the night.
I tried to hold on, be there for you.
A whisper from beyond the grave.
A whisper from beyond the grave.
(Oohing)
A whisper from beyond the grave.
