Alright, I need some feedback as to if i should keep writeing songs or not. How are this set of lyrics? Am I just an altogether crappy writer cause i need a strangers opinion.If you have anything at all to say about the lyrics, tips, ect. PlEASE PLEASE PLEASE help me out. Its a punk song just so u have an idea.


Verse 1

On the edge of destruction,
Familiar faces, Ive been here before,
Pass me another cigarette,
Taken a wrong turn,
Now Im,
Lost in my head


Chorus

Lost all sense of direction,
Locked up in my head,
And there is no key,
Drunken with confusion,
In a maze of disallusion,
Even im not here to save me


thats all so far, Should I quit while im ahead? All comments welcome