Hey.... I got nothin against posting stuff like that as long as it's easy as hell to get the thing playing.

the only thing that screws me up is places that require you to sign up and register and provide a pic of your newborn to just listen to one song.

That said.....

Decent song.... if there's any way to load it at a higher kbps then go for it....
there's nothing that turns off people than lo-fi songs at 128kbps or lower.

Song wise.... not bad.... only my opinion but I'd 'cool' up your singing a bit .... instead of singing 'giant fighting robot' I'd cool it up like 'gaaan faaatin robod ......"
Music wise, not bad.... but add something in there to blow people away.... a lead or something that makes guys go 'whoa'.....

Just my opinion tho..... brought on by a bottle of sherry my dad bought me :)