New Demo- "Waterfalling" Please Critique.


casperld
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01/29/2005 8:32 pm
Heres a new demo I recorded at home yesterday, Its called Waterfalling. Please leave a comment ,bad or good, if you listen. The link is http://wg2.dmusic.com

Thanks..
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01/29/2005 9:57 pm
not a big fan of it. Too simple. no catch to it. no pattern, its just there

its a good start though.....
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01/29/2005 10:50 pm
I also am not a fan. I got to tell you that you might be on to something as far as developing a cool original sound. The singers voice is pretty good but not the voacl melody or lyrics. The song isn't exciting enough to make me personally want to keep listening.
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01/30/2005 4:42 am
Wish I could but once again it's a link to a freebie web page with a sound file that doesn't work on an OS9 Mac.
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casperld
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casperld
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01/30/2005 5:57 am
It should work for you. I too have a macOs9 and it plays fine, try downloading it and open it in Itunes.
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02/03/2005 12:19 am
A good mix but I think the vocals are just a touch too loud. Turn'em down a bit and I think itwill sound better. I like the song though, I think it's pretty original and has a lot of feeling.
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02/03/2005 6:14 am
Its alright but the part where it is like waterfalling yeah waterfalling yeah...drop the yeah and draw out the water falling or somthing.
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