ok guys, this is what going on. I need you to help me out w/ these lyrics....give me some ideas for the rest because im not done with them yet. And dont just say its crap, you have to say why its crap..hehe

I think i know you
ive seen you walking down my road
I think ive seen those light brown eyes
The ones to the neighbor I sold
sometimes i realize
how much ive missed
how much ive lied

And thats as far as I got...if there are any tricks to writing songs besides rhyming words...tell me please ...keep in mind i have to make these lyrics for my music program at school...so no satan stuff