But the verse doesnt fit with the intro. The intro sounds like its gonna break into an erie crazy bottom end chugging riff that blows your mind to peices.But it isnt
My opinion is: I dunno if you wanted to change the song or if you just wanted to hear what people think, but this is mainly what I think
intro-perfect
verse- doesnt fit intro ( a little to happy sounding compared to the intro )
It sorta sounds like a sum 41 kinda riff to me.
chorus and intro to chorus- dont like very much
Ya know what man, you have incredible talent. And I think you show that in the intro, but I think If you expressed your talent a little more in the verse and chorus it would've been better.
I can hear breaking benjamin doing the intro, then sum 41 doing the rest of the song.
To me it doesnt really fit.
I'de like to hear some more stuff you got.
But all together you have good talent. :)
