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The innocence, and the one who pray.
-The innocent, and the one who prays.
-The innocent, and the one's who pray.


Feel the way though sweet seduction
Like moth to a flame, prepare do die
This is the day the Madonna cry
-Feel the way through sweet seduction
-Like a moth to a flame, prepare to die
-This is the day the Madonna cry's




I think that's about all I found. None of them were a big deal, just little common misstakes. I wouldn't recommend taking me too seriously though, because I'm not that great at spelling and grammer myself. Again, you did a very good job on these lyrics. I really enjoyed them ;)