When the sun sets

(verse)
When the sun set's
And light creases
The zombie lurks
And life decreases

(chours)
run, run, forest run
get off the street
your life is done
they will defeat

(Verse)
When the sun set's
Scary creatures growl
Lock your doors
We're on the prawl

(Chorus)
run, run, forest run
get off the street
your life is done
they will defeat

When the sun set's
Demon you hear
Turn out the light's
Closed eye's in fear

Kyle Evan Richmond ;)

This might work as a tongue-in-cheek satire on Iron Maiden or a similar band. However, the lyrics are too static to flow naturally in a more serious setting. Although I do like "Run, run, Forest run" And I think I'm gonna steal that just like you did, hahaha. But yeah, I'm writing a Maiden-like song now as well. I'll post it when I'm done.

This is dumb... but when I first read it I liked the line "run, run, forest run." Which is weird, because some weird dude (who i've never associated with in my life) thought the same thing. Other than that... didn't see anything remarkable about the lyrics.