Originally Posted by: Kutzkiok here we go first time sorta for writting words so feel free to be brutaly honest with me
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well tell me whatcha think i know its short but i really dont write songs so just be honest with me :D i can take it :p[/QUOTE]

Shouldn't have said that with Jolly around! :)

Originally Posted by: KutzkiWere even the sun up in its stop did not shine

Like Jolly said, this doesn't really make sense. Also, "where" and "were" are two different words.

[QUOTE=Kutzki]Maybe it's just one of those years