Originally Posted by: iamthe_eggmanWhat do you mean re: melody / syllables? I don't really see a connection.

Ah, I just meant if you changed the melody you might have to change the amount of syllables in each line in order to fit that melody, thus making you re-write the lyrics.

Also, when I say I'm not a huge fan of these lyrics it's mainly because I don't have much of an affinity for this kind of song, it's no fault of the lyrics themselves. For the type of song you're doing, they're phenomenal.