Originally Posted by: iihollyWell, I wrote this with the help of a friend, Kelsey, on two lines. I'll put a little * by the two lines she wrote for me. Anyways, don't make too much fun of it.[/QUOTE]

Mmmm.. Kelsey's.... they have 2 for 1 wings now on Mondays...mmmmm....

[QUOTE=iiholly]*that wisdom is sunlight and sunlight is gold

I like this line... kind of Bono-ish.


Oh, and the last line doesn't have a "rhyming partner", if you know what I mean, wink wink, nudge nudge. Wait a second, there's no hidden meaning there. I actually just meant that it's one half of a couplet, if you catch my drift, guv'nor- you-seem-a-man-of-the-world-wink-wink-nudge-nudge.


Yeah, I wish I got this kind of feedback on my lyrics. Hmmm... it's either because holly is a girl, or because my lyrics suck..... I think I'll take option (A).