Sh1t!!!! thats good!!!!! seriously more feeling than some of the stuff people have posted on here! they may be technicall better but just seem to run it off, sounds like you actualy mean what you play (if that makes any sense) especially the first section where its really slow, i liked it reminded me of pink floyds wich you were here.
1 bit of advice: be more confident with your bends, theyre a little flat, just push it a little further and maybe hold it for a sec or 2, cos then it would sound great! but don't worry it comes with experience and as your ears become more err "tuned" you will notice an it will come naturally to play it right!