My song.

"Song about a man."

I'm not feeling inspired by the subject.
I don't have that much to prove.
I don't think my motives should be suspect.
We're all doin' what we choose.

Now I've got a little bit of magic.
Of course maybe it has me.
I don't mean, too seem so damn emphatic.
But can't you please agree?

I can't say which way I'll go tomorrow
Don't know where I've been today
I can't tell you if I give or borrow
Every man takes time away

So tee ****in hee
The clock laughs as it turns
And tee ****in hee
I'll recite what I learned
So tee ****in hee
The clock laughs as it turns
And tee ****in hee
I'll recite what I learned

So in school he sat and listened closely
Don't know exactly what he heard
Now at work he'll do the same thing mostly
A change is coming soon for sure

She told him that she wanted something
He said he wanted something more.
He liked the everything or nothing
She liked the thing he wasn't for.

He lay down and cried into the carpet
And he made sure that no one saw.
His tears welled, as if there were a market
She drew his last unbroken straw.

So tee ****in hee
The clock laughs as it turns
And tee ****in hee
I'll recite what I learned
So tee ****in hee
The clock laughs as it turns
And tee ****in hee
I'll recite what I learned

I'm not feeling inspired by the subject.
I don't have that much to prove.
I don't think my motives should be suspect.
We're all doin' what we choose.

lets me guess its about......you?
nobody can see this =p
wow how did i guess?!

Thats good, especially the first line *cough*. :D Cheer up emo kid.

I quite like this one, it seems...relateable, but not so much that I'm crying over it. Well done, I'd say.

I might cry over it if it was an actualy recorded song, and I was in the right mood.

Nice lyrics there Jolly. I cracked up at the thought of the chorus being put to a voice, but other than that some nice existentialist angst-ridden vulnerable lyrics indeed.

Originally Posted by: LeedoggNice lyrics there Jolly. I cracked up at the thought of the chorus being put to a voice, but other than that some nice existentialist angst-ridden vulnerable lyrics indeed.

Actually you can thank iiholly for the chorus (and the first line, though on accident). But yeah, it actually isn't bad set to music, as awkward as it may seem.

Originally Posted by: LeedoggNice lyrics there Jolly. I cracked up at the thought of the chorus being put to a voice, but other than that some nice existentialist angst-ridden vulnerable lyrics indeed.

Actually you can thank iiholly for the chorus. But yeah, it actually isn't bad set to music, not .

Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonActually you can thank iiholly for the chorus. But yeah, it actually isn't bad set to music, not .

huh? This double post is weirding me out.

Originally Posted by: Leedogghuh? This double post is weirding me out.

What double posting? BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Yeah, I did it on accident.

Any positive contributions I make, usually are on accident.
You better be getting a mic soon Jolly, I want to hear the melody you come up with (especially tee ****in hee). :)

LOL attack of the killer [jolly mcjollsyon double post


He has a mic =D

Do you got links to any songs that are done yet?

Originally Posted by: LeedoggDo you got links to any songs that are done yet?

Sadly, no.