Woohoo!!!
http://s93744050.onlinehome.us/mp3/Stargate.mp3
The theme song to my new TV show.
Something that smells like cheese!!!
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(I'm just repeating my previous comments on the pieces here, just to get the ball rolling)
Could use a stronger groove, but the beat is very compelling; just needs to be stronger in my opinion. This could be a killer song if you add the right vocals! I wasn't really moved by the guitar solo; it seemed to be from a completely different place than the rest of the song and didn't really add much to the overall song. However, there is a place for such solos, and perhaps you feel this is it. The chipmunk voices at the end are a bit cheesy.
Could use a stronger groove, but the beat is very compelling; just needs to be stronger in my opinion. This could be a killer song if you add the right vocals! I wasn't really moved by the guitar solo; it seemed to be from a completely different place than the rest of the song and didn't really add much to the overall song. However, there is a place for such solos, and perhaps you feel this is it. The chipmunk voices at the end are a bit cheesy.
... and that's all I have to say about that.
[U]ALL[/U] generalizations are [U]WRONG[/U]
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[U]ALL[/U] generalizations are [U]WRONG[/U]
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