Lyrical intro


BluesMetal
Registered User
Joined: 07/12/04
Posts: 21
BluesMetal
Registered User
Joined: 07/12/04
Posts: 21
07/12/2004 2:49 pm
Was working on some lyrics and the following kind flowed out, not fitting to what I was doin' but figured I'd share them because they seem kinda cool to me :)

Fallin' stars light up the night,
the angels sing beyond.
Eternally the embers burn,
can we bare the storm?

Tomorrow waits in shadowed gates,
another lesson to learn.
Open your eyes and realize,
true love can never turn.
# 1
koz303
Registered User
Joined: 09/22/04
Posts: 1
koz303
Registered User
Joined: 09/22/04
Posts: 1
09/22/2004 10:11 pm
these lyrics have no direction, they seem like you were putting lines in there to put them in there. :(
# 2

Please register with a free account to post on the forum.