How Should I approach this?


Gainer
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Gainer
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04/03/2003 10:47 pm
This is part to a song of mine.

I'm a saint, i'm a sinner
kill the cook and ask "What's for dinner?"
Commit murder, save lives
Break a clock and ask for the time.

It don't matter what i do (i do)
cause no matter what it's all the same (the same)

The priest, is who makes them scream and
The liar, is the the savior of the
Brain washed F*ck$!
If I leave here tomorrow,
Will you still remember me?
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metalisbest
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metalisbest
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04/04/2003 1:21 am
I think you should just throw away because those are horrible lyrics.
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Tele Master
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04/04/2003 1:29 am
Take out the (i do) and (the same) for sure.
Electric Guitars are the inspiration for cries of "Turn that damn thing down"-Gibson website
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u10ajf
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u10ajf
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04/05/2003 1:22 pm
Originally posted by Tele Master
Take out the (i do) and (the same) for sure.

I think that's a bit extreme! Personally I think there are some funny ideas in there. Maybe needs a bit of re-arranging though.
If I couldn't laugh at myself how could I laugh at someone less ridiculous?
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