What do you think of these?


daveichler
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daveichler
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01/28/2003 1:06 am
Here are some lyrics i came up with on a train ride, what do you think of them?

Time feels like a neverending cycle
Sun rises in the morning, Sets at night
Only to rise and shine for a new beginning
And a brand new day

Proud of where I'm from
Looking Forward to where I'll go
I'll take this road one turn at a time
Enjoying life as it passes by



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icecool
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icecool
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01/28/2003 8:30 pm
Thats pretty reflective dude, its cool, I enjoy lyrics like that.

Ill give you an example of bad lyrics:

DEATH DEATH DEATH DIE IM GONNA KILL EVERYONE.

but y'know, thats just me. :D
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daveichler
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daveichler
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01/28/2003 9:10 pm
Thanks a lot man, I can agree with your idea of bad lyrics. Any comments or criticism towards the lyrics I posted earlier would be really helpful. Thanks.
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