I like the guitar; very bluesy. It all blends well together. The vocals aren't that bad either. Obviously the guy is no Bruce Dickinson, but he isn't bad. The chorus sounds pretty cool as well. I also like the piano. This kind of reminds me of Elf, but with much better production, and a softer sound.

Nice job. I'd be proud if I wrote that...I'm proud when I write my own material, of course, so I know how fun it is to play in a band, no matter how simplistic or how second-nature a song may become. Once Apocalyptic Dawn records some more stuff, I'll definitely post it all here. If midis suffice, then I'll probably post those.