I'm not going to say anything about the musical side of this recording since I don't know too much about this kind of music... plus this is the "recording" section of the forum, I'm sure you were aiming for some more reactions on the actual production of the recording.

Anyway, overall the recording sounds very clean and clear...way to go!

kick drum: I would have given it some more low end and "click" in order to leave more room for bass and guitars, it sounds like whoever mixed it tried to do this but didn't really get it spot on

guitars: they sound a bit sharp/harsh to my ears...a little less highs and a bit more mids would make it easier on the ears

vocals: there's not much you can do to increase intelligibility during the screaming, but it's too bad the clean vocals kind of get lost in the mix, they just don't poke through and aren't very clear