These are some lyrics my freind and I wrote and I wanted to see how you liked them. The song is called Modify keep in mind we don't have the whole thing this is just what we have come up with so far.

Modify

Faintly gasping for a chance
to take away a broken past
Problems
kept in soon arrived
then roughly snap from
compressed hurt inside
elevator to my veins
Stopped
with memories of tired pains
a toxic blood buried within
seeps from heart to skin
Ignorant
to an unvoiced death
thoughts leak
from head to breath
Steady
internal warfare
consists with judgments given without care
beneath the mirror I surrender
to a feeling I can’t remember
If
I could just alter their view
I’d turn my life in for a new
Break
away and don't turn back
these thoughtd peirce like a sharpend tack
I can't modifiy a life I didn't choose
realize every word you speak leaves a bruise
Faintly gasping for a chance
to take away a broken past