i went back and listened to it, it does need some bass, which i can add. also i didn't use a metronome because it's supposed to be freetime.
a teacher would be nice, but my circumstances right now don't allow for it. thanks for your input, i appreciate it.
To improve technique and of course trying to keep all as clean as possible. I know my own limits and speed limits and so on I never play anything I'm not capable of. That wouldn't make any sense. After three years of playing I tried to play everything as fast as possible and that sounded, I would say, like shit, and I didn't realize that if I'd play bit slower things than I was capable of playing then everything would sound much better.
--Aleksi Laiho - Advice to Play By
--Aleksi Laiho - Advice to Play By
